Welcome to English 830!
I’m really excited to be working with you for English 830: Research and Practice in the Teaching of College Composition (English 830: Teaching Composition for short!). For our first day, I’d like you to start with a journal writing activity. The steps of this activity are described below. I hope you will enjoy the activity and that it will help you think about the importance of having composition students actively write.
Preface Required Materials and Tasks
- A nice journal
- We will be doing a lot of journal writing this session
- While you could type your journal entries on your laptop, I have envisioned this activity as a very embodied writing experience which is likely to be enhanced physically by writing long hand
- You’ll want to bring your journal with you to class every day
Preface Activities
For this activity, you will be writing in your journal 4 times for 10-15 minutes each. I also have a song for you to listen to, and I want you to take a few breaks. This whole activity should take you about an hour, maybe a little longer. This is all you need to do today for English 830. I’m calling it the preface to our course.
There is reading to do, but you can start that later. The readings won’t be due til next week.
This is meant to be an interesting and fun activity. I hope you enjoy it.
Part 1. Find a Good Place to Write
- Today I’m going to have you start your CAL journal
- I’d like you to pick a nice place to write
- You can write in your apartment, but you might want to go to a coffee shop or just somewhere in nature (hopefully you can find a cool spot to write)
- You get to pick, but take a little time to find a good spot
- Also, before you write, I want you to listen to a song, Alicia Keys’ “Diary”
- I’d like you to watch the video, which is linked below, but if it is easier for you to just play the song on your phone, that’s fine too
- In case you are going to be writing in a public place like a coffee shop, then you might want to bring along headphones/earbuds
- Finally, if it is easier for you to listen to the song and then go to your writing spot, that’s fine too; do whatever works for you
Part 2: A Little Music for Starting Your Journal
- Once you get to your writing spot, listen to the Alicia Keys song I’ve selected
- This a song about keeping a kind of diary
- In this case, the “diary” the singer is talking about is actually her!
- She is being a “diary” for her lover, telling him he can safely share his secrets with her
- It’s an expanded idea of keeping a diary, but it’s a good song and works pretty well for our purposes
- A diary and a journal are not exactly the same thing, but they are close enough for the moment
- And, because the song raises the issue of safety and secrecy when writing, this is a good moment for me to stress that while we will be sharing thoughts from the journal writing you do this session, you will get to choose what to share and when to share
- Dr. Pagnucci will not be reading your journal
- Your classmates will not be reading your journal unless you choose to share something with them
- It is always ok to say, “I’ll just do a general summary of what I worte,” or to even say, “I would prefer not to share this journal entry”
- With that said, I hope you enjoy this song from Alicia Keys’ album, The Diary of Alicia Keys
Part 3. Journal Writing A: The Beginning (10-15 minutes)
- For today, I would like you to use your journal to reflect on the beginning of your Summer 2024 CAL experience
- You can write about anything you like
- You are also welcome to draw in your journal if you feel so moved; whatever you feel like doing
- I’d like you to spend about 10-15 minutes writing
- I won’t be checking to see how much you wrote or how long you wrote; do what is best for you
- I’d like this to be a meaningful writing experience for you, but I do want to give you a minimal time frame so you feel you have done justice to the task, but aren’t spending all day doing it
- For the first part of your writing, just record all the thoughts that come to your head in a stream of consciousness writing experience (freewriting, as we like to call it in Composition Studies!)
- Start with this simple questions, “What are you feeling and thinking about as you begin your Summer 2024 CAL experience?”
- Start with that question and write until you run out of steam
- 10 or 15 minutes would be a good for a time frame for you to write
- When you are done, write the date on the first page and put some sort of title/heading
- It’s also useful to put page numbers in your journal for reference
Part 4. Take a Pause
- I want you to enjoy this writing experience
- So pause
- Stand up
- Stretch
- Take a few deep breaths
- Look around and drink in your environment
- Sit back down and close your eyes for a few minutes
- Take some more deep breaths and listen to the space you are in
- I’m asking you to pause to keep you from feeling rushed
- You have plenty of time, so pause long enough to refresh yourself
- Then, when your ready, go back to writing
Part 5. Journal Writing B: The Good (10-15 minutes)
- Again, I want you to write for 10-15 minutes for this part
- Think of something positive
- I want you to focus on something that is really good in your life
- Something that makes you happy and brings you joy
- Write this positive thing down
- Spend a little time describing this positive item and why it is a good part of your life
- What other good things flow from this positive part of your life?
- How does this give you strength and encouragement?
- When you are done, mark this positive thing in your journal
- You might want to put some stars or circle a heading for this part; do whatever you need to so you can find this item in your journal later
- Any time you feel stressed or lost, I want you to return to this page in your journal and read it to give yourself some positive energy
Part 6. Take a Pause
- Time for another break
- Pause
- Stand up
- Stretch
- Take a few deep breaths
- Get another cup of coffee if you need it or a snack to energize yourself
- Sit back down and close your eyes for a few minutes
- Take some more deep breaths and listen to the space you are in
- I’m asking you to pause to keep you from feeling rushed
- You have plenty of time, so pause long enough to refresh yourself
- Then, when your ready, go back to writing
- We have 2 parts left
Part 7. Journal Writing C: The Bad (10-15 minutes)
- Again, I want you to write for 10-15 minutes for this part
- Ok, of course not all our thoughts and writing are positive
- We all have worries and concerns to deal with, so let’s spend a little time on them
- I don’t want these to overwhelm you, though
- That’s why I had you write about something really positive already
- That is meant to give you strength as you face the tough stuff
- So here we go…
- Write about any worries, concerns, or fears you have
- Doctoral students also sometimes suffer from imposter phenomenon (formerly called imposter syndrome); this is the fear that you aren’t good enough to be in the position you are in or, in this case, a doctoral student in the CAL Program
- If you are feeling this concern, please write about it
- A lot of people have this worry
- Dr. Pagnucci had it when he went to graduate school, too, and in his first job, and sometimes, even now
- You are not alone
- I’ve included an optional reading at the end of this page that offers more information on imposter syndrome (it’s interesting, but I would read that later; for now, keep working on the journal writing activities)
- One way to help students resist imposter phenomenon is to reinforce and support them with positive messages
- So, I want to say to you, very clearly, that you deserve to be here!
- The CAL Program is very selective and we only admit students we believe will be successful in completing the Ph.D.’s
- Let me emphasize, then, that you belong here, we want you here, and you are going to do well here
- You are here for a reason
- Feel free to write that in your journal!
- Getting all these stresses down on paper can give you some valuable perspective on them
- True, writing about your worries won’t solve them all, but maybe it will ease your mind for a few minutes
- Your worries are down on paper, now, so let them go, at least for a little while
- Give yourself a break
Part 8. Shake It Off!
- Ok, let’s get rid of some of that negative energy that is tied to our worries
- Stand up
- Shake your arms and breathe away that bad stuff
- If you don’t want anyone to see you shake your arms, then do something like press your hands together
- Or walk away from your table and just breathe a little
- That will help
- Get rid of the bad thoughts
- Yes, they aren’t gone, but you can push them away for a little bit; I give you permission
- Get a drink of water or something if you can
- When you are ready, and you feel your head is a little bit clear again, sit back down for the last writing activity
Part 9. Mini-Research: A Favorite Quote
- Before you do your last journal writing for today, I want to have you find something good to help further offset that negative stuff
- So, I want you to record in your journal one quote that is important to you
- This can be a quote you love, from a book or a movie
- It can be something inspirational or spiritual
- It could be something about writing or teaching
- Whatever you want
- If you know the quote you want to record, just write it in your journal
- Also record the name of the person who said the quote and the page/date if you can get that information
- I might as well share one of my favorite quotes since we’re on the subject
- In case you don’t know already, I love superheroes, and here’s a great quote to show you way:
- Peter Parker: “Whatever comes our way, whatever battle we have raging inside us, we always have a choice. My friend Harry taught me that. He chose to be the best of himself. It’s the choices that make us who we are, and we can always choose to do what’s right.” (from Spider-Man 3)
- In case you don’t know already, I love superheroes, and here’s a great quote to show you way:
- If you don’t have a favorite quote or can’t remember it, spend a little time researching online to find a good quote
- While it can be quite enjoyable reading inspirational quotes, I don’t want you to spend forever doing this, so limit yourself to about 15 minutes if you are searching for a good quote
- Once you find the quote you want, record it in your journal
- You should mark this quote in your journal
- Put a box around it or stars or highlight it with a special color
- Do something so the quote is easy to see and find
- Once you have your quote recorded, you can move to the last writing task
Part 10. Journal Writing B: The Power of Writing (10-15 minutes)
- Read your quote one more time
- Then start writing about whatever that quote brings to your mind
- Again, just freewrite (stream of consciousness writing)
- Use your writing to think about why this quote is so meaningful for you
- Spend about 10-15 minutes writing this last part
- When you feel you have reached a good stopping point, put down your pen and close your journal
- Smile (yes, smile, it’s good for your body!)
- You’ve done nice work
- Pat yourself on the back (for real, if you would like!)
- Tomorrow I will have you re-read your writing and reflect upon the experience, but for now, let’s just have you finish your day with one more song
Part 11: A Little Music to Close the Day’s Journal Writing
- Here’s a great song to wrap up this activity
- After you play this song, you are done
- Video: “Write About Love” by Belle and Sebastian
- I didn’t ask you to write about love, but Belle and Sebastian say it’s the answer to all our woes
- And it’s a fun song even if you aren’t in love
- I’ll see you tomorrow
- I’m looking forward to meeting each of you!
Assignments
Due July 8 Monday: Required Readings–The Writing Process
You don’t have to start these readings today. They are not due until next week. But if you want to get rolling on the readings after doing your writing, here’s where to start!
- Murry, Donald. (November, 1972). “Teach Writing as a Process Not Product. The Leaflet, 11-14.
- Seminal article on why we should focus on the process of writing rather than on having students create products we can grade
- Jenkins, Rob. (2020). Why we must get back to basics in teaching composition. The Chronicle of Higher Education.
- Associate Professor of English at Georgia State University’s Perimeter College who advocates returning to traditional focus for teaching composition
- Note, to read this article, you have to sign up for a free email subscription to The Chronicle (you can always cancel later)
- Yood, Jessica. (Mar. 11, 2016). From crisis to composition. Inside Higher Ed.
- In this fascinating article, Jessica Yood, a college composition teacher, actually takes a first year composition course for a sabbatical project
- A Note about All the Course References: I have tried to provide accurate references in APA format. However, I have chosen to use full first names, rather than only full last names as APA does, to help students to learn who key scholars are. Please be aware, though, that in standard APA format, Gian Pagnucci would be abbreviated as Pagnucci, G.!
Optional Materials
These materials are recommended but not required. These two readings below may be interesting to you if you wish to learn more about the concept of “imposter syndrome:”
- Saymeh, Amal. (2023, Feb. 22). What is imposter syndrome? Definition, symptoms, and overcoming it. Better Up.
- Psychology Today Staff. Imposter Syndrome. Psychology Today.
While many people discuss feeling like they are professional imposters or are just “faking it til they make it,” imposter syndrome is a medical issue for some people. If you want to learn more about the medical nature of this phenomenon, you may wish to read this optional article: